Hey there!

Uh, before I start, the next time you do a picture, go to 'Image -> Image Size' in Photoshop. Shrink your image down before you upload it, make sure when you're looking at it in Photoshop that your picture at 100% zoom is not too big. The full-view of this picture is 2480x3507 pixels, it doesn't fit on the screen. Too big. Don't worry, it's a common mistake with scanners, just make sure next time you make the image smaller.

Okay I'm done! Unfortunately I can't make much of an advanced critique, as I can't see the full-view picture.

I like how you've coloured this picture, you're getting the hang of the dodge and burn tool pretty fast. You're also making flying progress with posing your characters and the detail of the muscles. It's also great that you put so much effort into the costume design. Just a point, that isn't really to do with this picture, but important, is to remember the body underneath the clothes. Make sure you know where the joints are, but I think you already know that.

Since you're making such fast progress, maybe you could try putting in backgrounds? Trying out human faces is a biggie, too. They're not that bad.

Otherwise, great pic! I am envying your ability to draw bulky muscle without it looking stupid - must be a guy thing - and your detailed costume design. Good job.

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Really nice job, but it would be nice if you shrank it some.

sorry i know, I'm a first time photoshop user. Will remember next time

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Be glad you have photoshop. All I have is paint and some photo editing thing my computer came with.

I really like this. The detail is great!

Thanks

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yo man
I love ur use of colors. Maby if u want we can do a coap piece, i draw u paint.
Send me a mesage if u want or not.

Whilst I'm seriously flattered by your request, I don't think right now I'm good enough at using photoshop. I think I'm getting better though so maybe sometime in the future. Thanks again for your kind comments.

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Cool. Just keep cheacing my art and if u find any ink art that ud like to colab on tell me. If u want. Any ways good loks & peace!